Published December 14, 2008
(Soft)
Emo is the thing that you label me by,
but do you know what's inside of me?
Goth is the thing you call me by,
but do you know the emotions are running free?
(Screams)
You hide beahind your insecurities,
like I hide behind my eyeliner.
You join the fakes,
I join the freaks.
(Screaming stops)
That's right, I'm an emo goth.
I'm not afriad to show off,
who I am.(echoes who I am)
That's right I'm the strange looking
freak who's obsessed with bam.
(Screams) Get over it
(Screams) Get over it
I live off of black,
you love pink.
My wrists are always hacked,
but you rely on your links.
(Screams)
You hide beahind your insecurities,
like I hide behind my eyeliner.
You join the fakes,
I join the freaks.
(Screaming stops)
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Hey, I like your song. I can hear it now! Nicely done
It expresses who you are and you're not afraid to show off who you are.
You don't care what other people think.
I like that. I respect the spunk! Keep it up.
Lordgluzman, I liked your critique. Nice
Again, nice job
-thevoiceinside
Dang girl! I am not an emo but I sure do like goth style. In fact I wish I would be a goth in some ways. I think lyrics are really good for you. This song was great. Since I rite lots of lyrics I wanna recommend you something:
1) Next time you will turn on your Ipod or Mp3 or even you will listen to your song on the computer try to listen to what the singer meens with his words.
2) Pay attention close to the rhythm of the lyric.
3)Pay attention to how the singer sings or says the words.
wow!! I wish i could sing that to the chavs lol